first attempt at creative writing
scenes
#1#2#3#4#5#6two dormant robots sit in a white sterile room the male one benne a white-painted android with exposed, mechanical joints connecting his limbs and torso he slowly stretches waking up
benne: where am i
researcher through speakers: hello model you have been activated your purpose is to blend into human society to gather information on a rival criminal syndicate
benne slowly nods registering the information
researcher through the speakers: for the next few weeks you will be trained to perfectly mimic a highschooler and seek out rowdy individuals who you suspect would be willing to join a criminal syndicate
benne: yes ma’am
researcher through the speakers: wake her up
benne looks at the female android who looks identical to him if not for the wider hips eyes breasts and softer face he slowly walks up to it and starts shaking the body after a while of shaking the body finally stirs awake
the girl android stares at benne
researcher though the speakers: right now i am addressing the android who just woke up: your name is stella
stella: i am a robot whose purpose is to perfectly mimic a highschooler and seek out rowdy individuals who i suspect would be willing to join a criminal syndicate
researcher through the speakers: correct
benne: when do we start
researcher through the speakers: you start training in 3… 2… 1… training begins now
two highschool uniforms one female one male are suddenly thrown into the room after they've put the uniforms on the researcher starts talking
researcher through the speakers: tomorrow you will go to school during the day you will try to interpret and mimic human behavior without any prior experience
the following day at school stella and benne have soft skin overlaid over their hard robotic bodies with unremovable wigs harshly attached
stella: i feel like you’re not getting school
benne sits slumped forward head held up by both hands
stella: hello? i am talking to you
benne doesnt make an effort to look at her even as she scoots over closer
benne: i didn't realize
stella: are you disinterested in what we’re doing right now
benne: no i’m scouting delinquents
stella: you haven’t done anything since we’ve entered the classroom
stella looks around the classroom a couple of students are looking in their direction
stella: are we being suspected
stella flips her hair in an effort to look cool said students either continue staring or look away
stella turns to look at benne again who hasn’t changed positions stellas eyebrows furrow in an effort to convey frustration
stella: do something
benne: we are in class students aren’t allowed to leave class
stella: you’re not going to be able to scan anyone if you’re acting all disinterested like this
benne: i don’t know if you know this but you can have a certain expression on your face or hold a certain posture and be thinking of something that doesn’t at all match what your appearance indicates
stella: theory.
benne stops resting on his hands and leans backwards
benne: lets head to the rooftop after class
stella: lets
benne: what
stella: i agree
benne: why
stella: good opportunity to scout the student body
benne: that’s not really what i meant by that but sure
stella: in what way did you mean it
benne: sarcastically
stella: that wasn’t sarcastic at all
benne: yes it was
benne turns to face stella only to be immediately met with stellas unflinching unreadable large eyes
stella: lets see
stella: sarcastic meaning a tone or phrase which is intended to hurt or ridicule someone else either playfully or demeaningly
stella: you ask me to head to the rooftop after class
stella: i say yes
stella: are you saying that asking me to join you at the rooftop is supposed to be demeaning because there is something about hanging out with me specifically at the rooftop is funny
benne: yes exactly
stella: what is it then
benne: i don’t have to tell you anything
later at the rooftop the two of them are sitting together on the rooftop peoplewatching
stella scoots away from him
stella: from the left of you that girl in the thigh highs and red bow is asking the boy standing with her if we’re a couple
benne: so what
stella: did you forget? our directive is to look for suspicious people the most efficient way to scan personalities is to not stand out yourself
benne: what edge do you have if you’re concealed
stella: many
stella: not be bothered by others
stella: fade into the background
stella: not be recognized by others
benne: haha not with your voluptuous body you wont
stella: my proportions are similar to those of a teenage girl i don’t know what you’re talking about
benne: it was a joke
stella: a joke is funnier when its true
benne: you’re extremely bad at parsing sarcasm what are you talking about
stella: i was thinking aloud to share my reasoning you are interpreting that as stupidity
benne: haha insecure much i never said anything about stupidity
stella: i am incapable of feeling insecure
stella: then again i see how one could read that as insecure
stella: that was confirmation by the way there’s no subtext there
benne: yeah i got it
benne sighs and leans into the bench they’re sitting on while stella’s staring at him
stella: conversations usually work best when both parties are actively engaging
benne: pedantic
stella pauses before sighing
stella: stop being so petty
benne: im just driving the dynamic forward
stella sighs
stella: we are tools supposed to integrate into the environment not build a relationship with each other
stella: we–i am supposed to be monitoring the people here our conversation is distracting anyway
benne: go ahead
stella turns to look at him
stella: we have the same directive i expect you to help
benne straightens himself but doesn't immediately respond
benne: sure
later at expensive luxury apartment middle of the night benne is laying on the couch while stellas standing next to a whiteboard with marker in hand
benne: –dont you find it weird that the woman said we were going to undergo training yet we’re thrown into the outside world without any prior experience? why are we living by ourselves anyway
stella: i think the social interaction we experience now is supposed to be the training
stella: it’s possible later down the line she’ll ask us to come to their laboratory or we’ll get sent an adjustment or tip of our directive
benne: still
stella starts by drawing a large circle with the letters s+b in the middle
benne: replace the circle with a heart
stella starts wiping the circle before drawing a heart around the letters
stella: alright
stella: i counted–during homeroom around 7 students looked at us for a substantial chunk of the lesson
stella: on the rooftop i was able to identify 4 people who could potentially be interested in crime based on their appearance alone
she writes the numbers 7 and 4 and draws connecting lines to the center heart
stella: i will alert you when we come across these people again so you can help monitor them
benne: coooool
stella: i expect you to do more tomorrow, yes?
benne: yeah i will
benne: hard to do anything when we’re constantly in classrooms though
he leans into the plush pillows
benne: honestly a better approach is to have made us teachers or janitors or something
stella: are you trying to provoke me again? i thought we were over that
stella: and why are you questioning the mission so much anyway? you’re not really in the position to change or question what we’re supposed to do
benne: don’t you find it odd?
stella: no? as students we are free of responsibility and are able to more intimately interact with teenagers as opposed to being adults
stella: besides i imagine that adults are expected to be more familiar with social etiquette than teenagers giving us a direct excuse
benne: wow quick answer
stella: you’re not stopping the questioning
benne: why are we allowed to live by ourselves then?
stella: i dont know
stella: possibly to force the two of us to build trust and teamwork with each other?
stella: so we can execute our mission more efficiently
benne stretches out casually
benne: what if this is all a scheme to see if androids can develop emergent sentience? or if androids can fall in love with each other after prolonged intimacy?
stella: if that is the case then i have been successfully fooled
stella: but it’s not, i assume, and i will loyally continue to execute the mission
benne: why? in the name of the mysterious criminal organization we work for?
stella sighs almost exasperated, her pupils dilate slightly
stella: i, again, am a tool therefore have a duty to be an efficient tool for my creators
stella: your doubt is… odd
stella nods
stella: i see a pattern, do you?
benne shakes his head
stella: you are good at abductive reasoning, i am good at deductive reasoning
stella: an explanation could be that our intended design is a contrasting duo where we can learn from each other's behavior
stella points a finger at him
stella: that’s speculative, by the way
stella: not fact
benne: what are you pointing that finger for
stella: emphasis
stella: obviously
the following day at school
stella sits alone at her desk discreetly glancing at a particular student whose uniform is rugged has long, black hair and heavy makeup on, after a moment benne returns and sits down next to her
stella: hey, benne
benne turns to look at her
benne: what do you want
stella: don’t you think that girl over there looks odd
benne turns to look at the girl before giving a small nod
benne: i guess
stella: she could have the potential–
benne: no? lolita has little to do with gang participation
stella: what is that?
stella: and when did you find the time to learn this?
benne: i was scrolling on the laptop while you were doing whatever you do
stella: right
stella: and what does being a ‘lolita’ mean exactly?
benne: lolita or goth or emo
stella: stop introducing new terms
benne: they’re not exactly new, it all boils down to when a girl consistently wears black basically
stella: makeup? or do you mean outfit? because we’re all wearing the same school uniform
benne: makeup and outfits worn during leisure
benne: if you look closely you’ll see she has a specific style to her aura
stella turns to look at him
stella: what
benne: i’m saying she’s breaking convention by wearing thick makeup and styling her hair in a more rugged, punkish way
stella: oh
stella slightly furrows her eyebrows
stella: okay?
benne leans back, satisfied
stella turns to look at him again
stella: which one is she–lolita, goth or emo? and how do i distinguish them?
benne: i don’t know
stella’s mouth slightly sits open
stella: then why would you bring them up
benne: because i’m sure she’s one of them
benne: those cultures all have roughly the same outline
stella sighs
stella: you are bringing up new topics and then refusing to elaborate because you yourself lack the knowledge to see the nuance
benne: i was just trying to be helpful
stella: yes, i guess so
stella: now we know people who associate with those cultures are unlikely to engage in criminal activity
benne: not what i said at all
stella: explain
benne: i said it’s unlikely that she’s interested based on her outfit alone considering a way of styling oneself has little to do with gang participation
benne: they can still be a criminal independent of their appearance alone
stella: yes well its hard to categorize who might or might not be a criminal if you’re not factoring in appearance
stella: therefore we can assume she is less likely to be sensitive to crime
benne: so she’s less likely to have an aversion to crime?
stella: no–sorry. i meant she is less likely to want to engage in crime
benne: hm
benne: you know, maybe actually getting to know people would give a better in on people instead of basing it all off appearance
stella: is this something you just thought of?
benne: what does it matter
stella: if you already had this idea and chose to–for whatever reason–withhold it from me until now that signals communication and/or trust between us is lackluster
stella: good communication is important for a successful operation
benne: it’s just an observation that i thought gained increasingly more merit after seeing how your methods
stella: interesting
stella: maybe you should try talking to her, then
benne: no
stella: are you making a joke? why would you repeatedly tell me that talking to people is good and not commit yourself
benne: her appearance makes her look intimidating, besides i don’t want to impose
stella: what? we just established that based on her looks we could assume she’s not prone to crime, therefore not a dangerous person
benne: dangerous doesn’t equal someone who doesn’t engage in crime
stella sighs exasperated
stella: regardless a safer bet is to keep workflow manageable for us not to inefficiently check if every individual is worth flagging
suddenly the bell rings and students walk back to their seats
stella: making observations even if they are assumptions is a safer bet at quickly scanning the environment, especially considering how many students attend this school
benne: you should shut up now class is about to begin
lunch, stella’s approached by the girl they were just talking about
girl: hey, stella, is it? i love your makeup
stella turns to look at the sudden intrusion with a blank face
stella: what makeup
girl: the makeup.. on your face
girl: your face is honestly so clean
girl: and your lashes look natural yet fake at the same time? i love it
stella blinks, registering the girl must be confusing her artificial skin as smooth caretaking
stella: thanks
girl: mind sharing your routine?
stella: my routine..? of makeup?
girl: yeah
stella: i put it on and i smear it across my face
girl: that’s it?
stella: yes
girl: …okay, what do you use exactly? blush?
stella: among other things yes
girl: aha
the girl smiles nervously
stella: do you see yourself as unconventional?
girl: depends in what way you mean
stella: do you see yourself standing out from other people
girl: i tend to not see myself as someone who’s trying to be different
stella: so that’s a no?
girl: nah
stella: i see
the two stand there in silence
girl: i like your hair
stella: thank you
walking home
stella: talking to people is interesting but for me it didn't yield any new information
benne: oh? who’d you talk to?
stella: that ‘lolita’ girl
benne: okay. and did your perception of her change?
stella: my perception of her being muddied due to your insistence
benne: huh?
stella: she’s likely not dangerous, though you insisted otherwise
benne: oh, right
stella: yes so i don’t have a clear perception of her
benne: and the talk with her didn't change anything?
stella: not clearly considering we spent the majority of the time talking about each other's appearance
benne: and that wasn’t enough?
stella: no
benne: you can try again another day
stella: maybe
stella: i have yet to observe an advantage, though
the following day
two girls, sitting side by side, occasionally glance toward the new transfer boy
elle: him?
leila: yes, him. look at how he’s slumped over
elle: yeah, laaaame!! i guess he’s kind of cute, but he doesn’t seem to.. y’know, do anything
leila: is this not the first time you’ve seen him?
elle: it’s been like 30 minutes i think i’ve seen enough
leila: oh.. okay
elle: what
leila: he could be the love of your life, y’know
elle suddenly smacks leila
elle: don’t even joke
elle sighs looking at the roof for a moment
elle: i bet his personality is shallow
leila: ‘cause he’s cute
elle: yuh
leila: you’re not even giving him a chance
the boy slowly stretches out
leila: you’ve got to admit his boots are pretty cute
elle: you’re being superficial
leila: I’M being superficial?
elle: okay how about this? i’ll go walk up to him and i guarantee you the conversation is going to die in like 1 minute
elle gets up and taps on his desk benne looks up at her
elle: hi
benne: hello
elle: how are you?
benne: good
elle: i like your boots
benne: yeah
elle sighs
elle: where’d you buy them
benne: uhhh
benne: i got them from my caretakers
elle: oh, you don’t have parents?
benne shakes his head and elle’s eyebrows furrow
benne: no
elle: no?
benne: no
elle’s eyebrows stop furrowing
elle: …aha
elle stares at his hands for a moment
elle: i’ll talk to you later
she walks back to leila
leila: oh you were right
elle: that guy is so fucking weird dude
leila: oh ok
elle: you trust my judgment dont you
elle slightly leans in her head slightly tilted and one eyebrow raised
elle: what kind of response was that
leila: one of… doubt? besides i didn't hear what you were saying but the conversation sounded like it was going to serve your point regardless of how charming he was
elle gasps and pulls her head back
elle: how dare you! i gave him a proper chance and he fell flat on his face
elle glances at him for a moment
elle: no doubt he’s a shut-in
leila: that’s mean
elle: he literally didn't ask me a single question and acted like he wanted to be left alone
elle: i’m going to tell everyone he’s a shut-in
leila’s eyes widen
leila: elle you can’t do that that’s so mean
elle smirks
elle: what?
later during lunch stella and benne are sitting on the rooftop on a wall
benne: hi
stella: a girl is approaching our direction
leila: hey so so sorry to bother you but my friend who was talking to you is planning to spread rumors about you
benne: me
leila: yes my friend who was talking to you during class
benne: ohh
leila: i just wanted to give you a heads-up yeah? she’s kind of cruel toward people who, um, annoy her
benne: … okay?
leila: right
leila leaves silent
stella sighs
stella: so that lolita girl was an exception? you will talk to other people without problem
benne groans
stella: these rumors could cause you to stand out more
stella: and you said talking to peers was beneficial, no?
benne: i’ve literally done nothing she approached me
stella: interesting
benne’s mouth slightly frowns
benne: it’s probably because i’m so attractive
stella: that’s not a good thing, then
benne: that was a joke
benne sighs
benne: it would really help if i know what i did to prompt these rumors
benne: maybe i was teasing her too much
he starts subtly smirking
stella: yes
he frowns
benne: that was sarcastic i didn't tease her at all
benne leans his head on her shoulder and exhales
benne: atleast i have you i can rely on
stella turns to look at his head
stella: what are you doing
stella: get your head off my shoulder
benne straightens himself and his eyebrows furrow
benne: huh
stella: the rumor was, according to you, out of your control
stella: my rejection of your head is entirely self-inflicted
benne’s lips curve
benne: normally you explain your reasoning with less ambiguity
stella looks down slightly. her legs begin to slowly sway back and forth over the edge of the wall
new day weekend benne and stella are at the mall
stella: look there’s a jewellery store there
they walk in
stella: why exactly did you want jewellery
benne: refinement
stella watches benne inspect the various rings necklaces and watches
stella: we have around 150 united states dollars of funds to spend for leisure
benne looks up holding a small silver necklace
benne: 50 united states dollars
stella: i see
benne shakes his head before putting the necklace around stella’s neck
after he finishes stella unclasps the necklace
stella: let’s pay first yes
after paying they walk out the store stella shoves the necklace in his hands
benne looks at the necklace then at her and clasps it around her neck again
stella: is it meant for me?
benne: yes was that not obvious
stella: no
stella: you insisted on buying jewellery at a jewellery store for the purpose of refinement
stella: you paid for this product and now you are giving it to me
stella: without outright stating that it was a gift
stella: i’m sensing a pattern
benne: what, lack of communication
stella nods
benne: it’s a surprise is all
stella: are you joking? as in are you doing a “bit”
the left side of stellas mouth slightly downturns
stella: i see you are not taking my statements seriously
benne: what?
stella: i point out a lack of communication, by doing that i expect action or at the very least acknowledgement of my observation
benne sighs
benne: it’s a surprise
stella: why would you surprise me
benne: it makes us more humanlike
stella: riiiight
benne: what was that? did you just use inflection?
stella sighs
benne: that’s not how you use ‘riiiight’
benne: if that was meant to signal disappointment
stella: riiiight
benne’s mouth slightly opens
benne: alright
new day school during lunch the two of them are sitting in the classroom benne is revising notes while stella is silently staring at the other students
stella: i’ve noticed that the people who i’ve initially suspected all seem to spend a significant amount of time with each other
stella: benne
benne takes a moment before looking up at her
benne: …?
stella: i’ve noticed that the people who i’ve initially suspected all seem to spend a significant amount of time with each other
benne: oh
benne: maybe they’re influencing each other
stella: aha
stella: like a self-fulfilling prophecy
benne pauses before shaking his head
benne: no more like one starts smoking and the rest of the group follows to fit in
stella: if one of the group starts taking up cigarettes are they not the one who isn’t fitting in?
benne: no because they’re cooler
benne: or so people say
stella: who? this is a group where the norm is that they don’t smoke, so who would find it cool?
benne: other people
stella: and they influence the group?
benne: uhhh
benne: yeah
stella: alright
benne: alright?
stella: external influences influence the group, yes
benne: exactly
stella turns to look at him her eyes narrowing
stella: i can’t exactly see how that serves our directive
benne pauses before slowly nodding
benne: right? it’s like it’s a cover for something else
stella: that’s not what i said
stella: the information you shared just wasn’t immediately beneficial to… what we’re supposed to do
benne’s eyebrows furrow
benne: weird roundabout way to say ‘directive’ but alright
stella: i don’t understand what that means
benne leans further against his chair exhaling
stella: hmm
stella: this would be significantly easier if we were given proper training
benne: orrr this is just a cover
stella: no substance
benne turns to look at her
stella: you aren’t adding anything new when you say it
stella: i understand your theory
benne’s eyebrows raise
benne: are you… annoyed? defensive?
stella: no
stella starts to slowly tap her fingers against the table
benne exhales
benne: riiiiiiight, because you never overexplain yourself
stella’s gaze flickers between him and the students
stella: i aim for accuracy and a clean line of communication
stella: repetition when the conversation partner has already registered the point made is redundant
benne: doesn’t that imply you’re assuming the conversation partner is stupid?
stella: do i overexplain when it’s not necessary?
benne: subjective question but alright
stella sighs
stella: this exchange serves no purpose
the conversation falls silent for a moment
stella: you could benefit from a more precise way of speaking
benne: meaning?
stella: you do not clear up your point even when i ask for more clarity
he sighs stella turns to look at him
stella: is there a specific reason as to why you do not make yourself clear?
benne: … no?
stellas eyebrows furrow
stella: i don’t understand this
benne looks around the classroom
stella turns to look at him again
stella: why are you doing this
benne turns to look at her
benne: …?
stella shakes her head
stella: joking gives the illusion of openness yet you refuse to be open
stella: this is a large contradiction of your character
she turns to look at him
stella: what is that contradiction
benne: i see you as something to observe
stella: what does that mean
benne: as in i find your reactions to my actions interesting
stella: interesting
benne: yes interesting
stellas eyebrows stop furrowing